Saturday, 24 March 2012

Highway Rider

Bike.
Buzzed on beer.
Buttons black leather jacket.

Speed.
Stargazing.
Shedding all inhibitions.

Slow.
Succumbing
Steadily to alcohol.

Swerve!
Split-second.
Suddenly thrown into air.

Blood.
Broken bones.
Barely alive at nineteen.
Vented by at
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12 comments:

  1. Daydreamertoo24 March 2012 at 11:56

    That must hurt, because not only are there bones broken but there's also the deep bruising and awful friction burns too.
    Vivid imagery.

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    1. Unknown25 March 2012 at 09:18

      You bet it would hurt. Thanks for visiting! :)

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  2. indu chhibber24 March 2012 at 20:13

    One second makes all the difference!

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    1. Unknown25 March 2012 at 09:17

      Yes. It's frightening how much of a difference it can make.

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  3. Vyankatesh25 March 2012 at 05:58

    Always be safe.

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  4. Rohit Singh Jain26 March 2012 at 07:13

    Sad ending; you got to teach the character a thing or two about safe driving. Nice read.

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    1. Unknown10 April 2012 at 13:35

      Thanks Rohit. Pretty sure the character would have learnt his/her lesson.

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  5. Gwen26 March 2012 at 14:06

    My goodness. So much to see with so few words....clever!
    xx

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  6. Anonymous31 March 2012 at 07:00

    yikes, you've taken me on a harrowing, thrilling ride.

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